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Chapter 1, Modifier Placement

Modifier Placement

Background

  • Modifiers are words, phrases, or clauses that describe the subject discussed in a sentence.
  • A modifier must be placed directly next to the modified word; otherwise, it is misplaced or dangling. Consider the following example:

Carl Gustaf Verner, an author of passionately nationalistic novels, depicts Swedish life and traditions in his writing.

  • A modifier must be placed directly next to the modified word; otherwise, it is misplaced or dangling. Consider the following example:

I. Dangling modifier

A Dangling modifier is a modifying word, phrase, or clause that does not sensibly modify any word in a sentence. With this type of error, no noun or pronoun exists in the sentence for the modifier to logically describe. Consider the following examples:

Dangling: After looking on every street in the neighborhood, the lost cat was found. (Who was looking for the cat?)

1. _______. However, the discovery for which he is famous occurred not in the laboratory, but at supper.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

2. _______, one that ought to enthrall its passive reader and relieve him or her of the stress and tedium of life.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

3. _______ there was a great deal going on beneath the "surface" of the psyche.

Which choice completes the text so that it conforms to the conventions of Standard English?

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II. Misplaced modifier

A misplaced modifier is a phrase or clause that sounds awkward because it modifies the wrong word or group of words. The meaning of a sentence can be unclear if the modifier is misplaced, for example:

Unclear: The bats flew by the girls with sharply curved wings. The girls have wings! Clear: The bats, with sharply curved wings, flew by the girls. The bats have wings. Consider the following example: